Aw shucks thankyou so much! It's so nice you took the time to tell me what you liked, that always rocks and is very appreciated. I'm really pleased you enjoyed those parts with Asha, I sort of worry about getting her right 'cause she's such a strong personality. And ffff Qarl the Maid. Guy's like her lancer. They're so in love. It's just they have to be that nasty to each other in order to cover it up. Yeah I wasn't sure whether or not go for that horrifying kind of vibe at the end, I'm glad you thought it worked. I wanted to get across exactly that, how Theon must've known he was so fucked from the start but can't not try some spectacularly unwise 'you wont get away with this' type fireworks. Then he ends up so broken and argh shit just kills me.
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Date: 2012-02-20 04:30 pm (UTC)I'm really pleased you enjoyed those parts with Asha, I sort of worry about getting her right 'cause she's such a strong personality. And ffff Qarl the Maid. Guy's like her lancer. They're so in love. It's just they have to be that nasty to each other in order to cover it up.
Yeah I wasn't sure whether or not go for that horrifying kind of vibe at the end, I'm glad you thought it worked. I wanted to get across exactly that, how Theon must've known he was so fucked from the start but can't not try some spectacularly unwise 'you wont get away with this' type fireworks. Then he ends up so broken and argh shit just kills me.